The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The bar chart illustrates the information about the number of vehicle owners in China from 1987 to 1999. The figures have taken per thousand people.
Overall it is clear; China has increased the vehicle ownership dramatically over the period. From 1987 to 1993 it can be seen a gradual increase in vehicle quantity used, before it’s grew drastically after 1993.
In 1987, Chinese commuters used 250 automobiles per thousand people. It was doubled in next two years and accounted exactly 500 in 1989. After four years from 1987, it was reached almost just under 1000 per thousand people while it was leveled off until 1993.
In 1995 the number of vehicles was almost 2000 per thousand people which was a significant growth compared to previous years. It was increased by 1000 per thousand people in 1997, before reached to the peak of 4000 in 1999.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00689655172 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43712858081 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2890336587 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10242364847 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053977644673 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913163923959 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840025347783 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851165960811 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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