one should only take risk after carefully calculating the consequences
It took 70000 years to evolve from apes to sapiens. We see many species of same genes everywhere around. But genes of homos have only single species remained, we, the Sapiens. It didn't occur overnight but required struggle ranging from finding food for eating to habitat. But still, after all, Neanderthals, Floronsis, Eractas, etc got extinct except us. Because we are risk-takers.
Risk-taking is genetically encoded in our DNA. 13 Millenials ago, we lived in harmony with other species of humans. But there was a little different in their genetic structure and us. We traveled from western Africa towards central Asia, Eurasia, Europe, Eastern Asia, Southern Asia, Australia, Alaska, North America and then to Southern America populating each and every corner of our home planet. However, Neanderthals, on the other hand, stayed around the same region of Nehandher valley around the Eurasia region. And when an epidemic had spread across, they didn't make it to the 21st century, while we are splitting atoms and exploring mars beyond every capability of early humans.
Humans were always good at risk-taking. We never required to move out of our comfort region and go on a never-ending voyage of the open sea back then.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e species remained, we, the Sapiens. It didnt occur overnight but required struggle r...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to range'.
Suggestion: to range
...t occur overnight but required struggle ranging from finding food for eating to habitat...
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Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is, Eractas, etc got extinct except us. Because we are risk-takers. Risk-taking i...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...hen an epidemic had spread across, they didnt make it to the 21st century, while we a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, while, after all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.165 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58920354549 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705 0.4932671777 143% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2965187256 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7857142857 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0697343184658 0.243740707755 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309697918369 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476071203133 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458752058851 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167220873828 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.