The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of a modern lifestyle. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, owing to the sedentary lifestyle of people, the consumption of packaged food has significantly increased. Although this trend is more convenient and easy, in my opinion, its detrimental effect on health surpasses any of its advantages.
To embark on, undoubtedly, convenience food is advantageous as its preparation requires less energy, time and effort. This is because, these products are generally pre-prepared commercially and most of the times consumers can consume it directly or by putting little efforts, as a result, people get enough time and energy to manage the activities of a fast-paced life. For instance, one can consume 'Instant Maggie' by the Nestle just by heating it for 2 minutes in the microwave. Moreover, it is quite hassle-free as it does not requires cleaning of dishes, cutting and chopping of vegetables, which, in turn, save a considerable amount of one's time to spend in something productive work.
Nevertheless, despite the aforementioned advantage, in my perspective, the rise in the consumption of pre-prepared food has an egregious impact on the health of people. The reason for this is these products are generally packed and conserved using chemical preservatives, which are harmful to human health as it can cause various diseases such as indigestion, food poisoning, high cholesterol, diabetes and obesity. To illustrate, in the USA, there is a 50% hike in the cases of food poisoning among youngsters from the last 2 years, due to the overconsumption of fast and packaged food. Therefore, if the trend of convenience food will keep on rising in the same manner, then the major portion of the population will become unhealthy.
In conclusion, while packaged food items are preferred in these modern fast-moving life as they are time efficient and more convenient, in my view, the harmful impact of consuming chemically prepared convenience food on the health of people far out space its benefits.
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Suggestion: require
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29581993569 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1716146004 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2773533126 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.727272727 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151155605321 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588531123604 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482241687531 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923868626016 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389949805663 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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