You are going to have a business trip and arrange your friend to look after your children. Write a letter to the friend, in your letter, you should:
• tell him/her which kind of food your children like and dislike
• tell him/her which kind of activities your children can attend
• tell him/her the time you will pick up your children
Dear Jay,
Hi! How are you? I hope that you and your family are in pink of health. I’m writing this letter to ask for your help to take care of my kids during my absence while I’ll be out of the country for my business trip. This time I’ve to go for 10 days so you need to spend some more time with my kids.
I know that you absolutely like to spend time with my kids, Aarav and Avan. I think it will be very helpful to you if I share some of their eating habits with you well in advance. They’re fussy eater, specially Avan as he doesn’t like to drink milk at all. Instead of, they’re crazy for chocolate. So, please be careful with it and make sure that they don’t consume many chocolates in a day. Besides this, they like Pasta, Pizza, Kabab and Rice.
My kids usually likes to kill their time by watching cartoon on TV. Furthermore, you can take them out on weekends as they like to play football in nearby garden. Lastly, they’re crazy for bike rides so be aware about their demands.
Again, I should be really thankful to you for agreeing to do baby sitting for my kids. It was great relief when you agreed to take up responsibility. I’m returning back on 15th this month so I’ll pick them on 16th.
I look forward to seeing you on my return.
Warm wishes,
Milan.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-11-13 | Milan Desai | 92 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to spend some more time with my kids. I know that you absolutely like to spend...
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Line 17, column 160, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...eed to take up responsibility. I'm returning back on 15th this month so I'll pick th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, lastly, look, really, so, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53469387755 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39273508239 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5468345529 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7222222222 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123019371416 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455165399243 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459743317218 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789065458113 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437825877326 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.