Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In today’s world, it is obvious that there are more start-up companies that become more common. Compared to traditional companies, running a brand-new business seems to become a possible choice for people in these days. In this essay, I will first discuss the reasons why may cause to this, and then discuss the drawbacks of running one’s own business.
In recent years, thanks to the booming development of the Internet, there are new kinds of businesses springing up. The emerge of social media has created a great business, which lead to an innovative change of companies. Thus, if one foresees the potential market, it is possible for one’s to become self-employed. Moreover, working for a company means one need to obey all the rules and policies of a company. For those who are tired of being slaves of a company, being their own boss is also a great idea.
However, unlike working for a company, being self-employed also has its shortcomings. Starting up a new business may face numerous risky situations that one needs to face with, and the responsibility of the company will fall to one’s own. If the company is not able to get through difficulties, one may face the failure which may become in debt. Above that, traditional companies may have enough human resources to share the workload, however, being self-employed means that one may need to handle multiple tasks from different areas individually.
To sum up, there may be a lot of incentives to start up a new business, nevertheless, there are also new challenging and risks that need to face with. There is no right or wrong once making sure what career does one wants to pursue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Did you mean 'want'?
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Message: Did you mean 'want'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: want
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95035460993 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84593634051 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0003985945 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211838129547 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789498963137 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850349405635 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127055381317 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052674783082 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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