What are the advantages and disadvantages of children watching TV?
It is undeniable that watching televisions has become one of the most popular activity among the young people. While spending time watching one's favourite programs provides an abundance of merits, it has also demerits.
With regards to the advantages, firstly, TVs can offer a wide range of educational programs such as learning how to read, write and count. For instance, the program like the number blocks and alpha blocks teach young children how to count and read and youngsters learn through entertaining and without realising that they are acquiring a new knowledge. Secondly, TVs can provide an invaluable time for a family bounding, family members can huddle up front of the TV and share a moment. Last but not least, watching an informative show can also improve and encourage young people's critical thinking and analysing skills.
On the other hand, if the TV supplements the socialising or replace other activities then it will have a devastating consequences. It can cause physical and psychological health issues. For instance, watching many hours will result in not having enough time for socialise and for other physical activities. Subsequently they make themselves susceptible to become overweight, due to lack of physical exercise. In some cases children watch unsuitable programs, where violence and sex are glamorised. This can have a dangerous repercussions such as blindly imitating them and believing these kinds of acts are normal.
In conclusion, while TV should be watch for many good reasons, it has also its downsides. Therefore, parents and other guardians should restrict the TV channels and programs by choosing the right ones for their offsprings. If the TVs watch in moderation, it has an invaluable place in children's lives. Hence, advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93630951711 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5237508342 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184041418767 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608869929425 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510190843399 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118606186826 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624868213799 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.