A arge Billboard stands before your house which is troublesome for you. write a letter to the local authority explaining this problem and suggest ways for its resolution.
Dear sir,
I am Anna George, a resident of City centre, inscribing this missive to bring your immediate attention towards the Billboard in front of my house number 43/100. This board really troubles me alot.
This Billboard is exactly in front of the window of our master room which obstructs the sunlight and fresh air to enter inside. I am a working woman therefore I would like to take nap for a while on weekends in peace and tranquility. However, the negative vibes coming from bushes and shrubs do not allow me to get comfort here.
I must say that my children use to play under the tree and climb its branches. These are the open invitation to snakes due to large havens.it increased my anxiety about the safety of my children.
I would appreciate if you could please concern about it and fix this board somewhere else so that public and traffic will not suffer.
Your prompt action will be appreciated.
Your sincerely
Anna George.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...rt here. I must say that my children use to play under the tree and climb its br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75301204819 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46034008509 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710843373494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0239936034 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149196410333 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497569415866 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263549129594 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658312797873 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274045406302 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.