You are going to take a vacation soon. Write a letter to your friend
Tell him the reason why you want a holiday trip?
When you want to go?
What about the plan?
Invite him to go with you.
Dear John
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. It has been a long time we saw each other. That's why I have a plan to spend some time together, for this I have an exceptional idea for a vacation outing. Because of I have a one-month holiday from work so I decided to spend quality time with friends.
My vacation will start by 23rd, December and I planned to go on an excursion by 24th, December. I searched for some incredible places in India and we'll go to those places like Agra, Red Fort and others as well. If you agree we'd be also thinking about some hill stations. You know, I already booked a taxi to visit those places. One more thing we’ll celebrate Christmas in a city church, after that we'll start our journey.
What do you think about that? I hope you will love this idea and visit us soon. This reunion will be more enjoyable together.
Hope to hear from you soon
With regards
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John How are you? I hope this letter finds yo...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...has been a long time we saw each other. Thats why I have a plan to spend some time to...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'Because I' instead.
Suggestion: Because I
...exceptional idea for a vacation outing. Because of I have a one-month holiday from work so I...
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Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...like Agra, Red Fort and others as well. If you agree wed be also thinking about so...
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Line 19, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ope to hear from you soon With regards Emily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4450867052 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22545604673 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0224405866 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.9285714286 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266516456681 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10029197641 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756799837274 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170086614484 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184238642666 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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