You are going to take a vacation soon. Write a letter to your friend
Tell him the reason why you want a holiday trip?
When you want to go?
What about the plan?
Invite him to go with you.
Hi Jit,
How are you? I am sorry that I was not able to reply to your letter sooner as I was extremely occupied with office work. In the past few months, the work has been so hectic and exhausting that I have not even taken a single break even on weekends. Finally, my work is over and I am planning to a long break of two weeks in the coming month.
In continuing to date for travel, I am thinking to go on trip during the month of June. The first two weeks would be ideal as my new project will start at the end of the month so I would be completely free. Also, weather in Hyderabad would be horrible in June, so the best option would be to go to a hill station, like Ooty.
Coming to the plan for the holiday, it would be better to take some package from the travel companies. This way the whole arrangement would be taken care by them like transportation, food and accommodation. Although, it would be more strict as we won't get much time on our own, but having the tension for these arrangements would be even more worse. Also, the cost for the trip would be reduced to half by applying all discounts.
At last, I do remember that you had once told that you were also planning a similar trip to hill station. I am hoping that you would agree to come along with me. It would be more fun with you around. Do let me know your plans and if you wish to do any changes then we can discuss on them and act accordingly.
Yours Faithfully,
Madhulika
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1524822695 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34867715792 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8446888887 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1875 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170568726087 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700913120649 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642832097507 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106110457055 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862576997558 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1524822695 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34867715792 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8446888887 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1875 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170568726087 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700913120649 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642832097507 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106110457055 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862576997558 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.