You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons.
Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter:
• which course you have been applied for
• why you cannot join the course
• ask about the possibility of the course in the future
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to notify you that I will not be able to join the course of your college for which I applied and was accepted. Let me explain the reasons for not attending the course in detail.
I applied for Advertising and Marketing course from Amity University on 24th September and my application was accepted by the university. As this course would have helped me enhance my promotional and marketing skills which will aid me to enhance my career and future prospects.
However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to join the course as i gave an interview in McKinney company and have been selected for the job as an assistant manager with a decent salary and have accepted the offer. This will give me the opportunity to have an practical experience of the work culture and market. Moreover, it will help me to make goo contacts which will be beneficial in future.
I would like to request you to consider me for the course in next year semester as I am willing to join the course to increase my knowledge and expertise. Moreover, if you could provide me the university handbook containing details of the various courses and their fees.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Your sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... will not be able to join the course as i gave an interview in McKinney company a...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...is will give me the opportunity to have an practical experience of the work cultur...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e goo contacts which will be beneficial in future. I would like to request you to consi...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon. Your sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68918918919 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62394250384 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.066601298 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6363636364 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361583971404 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138232828667 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944944432363 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210885331064 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831275993434 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.