Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to Analytics for beginners course in your prestigious college. I have received your acceptance offer but I regret to inform you that, I will not be able to accept this offer.
I have been assigned an important project by my company due to which, I have to relocate for few weeks. The dates of my travel align with course tentative start dates. Therefore, I gave a thought to this and didn’t want to take a chance or probably deprive the chance for another students who aspires to learn from this course.
I also wanted to enquire is there any possibility for the course to be conducted in future. If yes, can you send me some details like tentative start dates or month, location and fees structure. This course aligns with my daily work moreover not only be beneficial for me but for my entire organization indirectly. I will be truly interested to enroll if there is a feasibility to conduct the course in future and probably learn from the greatest minds.
Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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...ill not be able to accept this offer. I have been assigned an important projec...
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... not be able to accept this offer. I have been assigned an important project...
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...who aspires to learn from this course. I also wanted to enquire is there any po...
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Suggestion: in the future
...sibility for the course to be conducted in future. If yes, can you send me some details l...
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...obably learn from the greatest minds. Looking forward to hearing back from you...
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...king forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Alex Smith
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...g back from you. Yours faithfully, Alex Smith
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.... Yours faithfully, Alex Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83769633508 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62964858313 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0988275562 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287341514883 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987651040774 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543063690579 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165866070424 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404103500147 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.