The benefits of computers in modern society far outweigh the disadvantages. What do you think?
Among recent communities, the merits of computers usage surpass any disadvantages. In this essay I totally agree with this approach. This is because computers revolutionize the way we communicate, and it helps us significantly in scientific research.
Since computers have emerged, communication with others day after day becomes easier and after unprecedented spreading of them, the world turns out to be like a small village, and it is convenient to contact with any person who is needed. As a result, recently, it noticed that some firms have been managed by online only and do not have any assets like Uber, the biggest taxi company in the world and does not have even one car. According to a study published by John Smith in AG magazine in 2013, 20% of modern business owners`, they effortlessly manage their work remotely in efficient manner through some web based online applications designed for this purpose.
Another advantage is that it facilities methods of scientific research. Searching for a reference or information what you need becomes more comfortable. As a result, it has been observed increasing at figure of papers had published after the advert of computer. According to a study conducted by Sue Ali in The Independent in 2016, number of studies published in 2000s have increased significantly by 200% than before, and these results indicate the importance of internet in scientific research.
In conclusion, even though internet has some drawbacks, its merits exceed harms because it has been developed the methods of communication with others and scientific research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of them, the world turns out to be like a small village, and it is convenient to...
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Line 9, column 361, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 2000s'.
Suggestion: in the 2000s
...nt in 2016, number of studies published in 2000s have increased significantly by 200% th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36078431373 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06045708014 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8940165802 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788670412983 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316759636255 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398951350621 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422989148895 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293863428049 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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