Nowadays people show more anti social behavior and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this? How we can improve it?
A conspicuous trend of increasing anti-social and disrespectful behavior is being observed. However, xenophobic mentality has become the core cause of it.The only key solutions to improve the situation is by educating at all levels and nipping such practices.
There are innumerable causes for such an asocial activity. Primarily, people have developed xenophobia towards immigrant communities. In other words, they have developed stereotypes about migrant societies and also believe that they will steal away their jobs, social security, and so on. Fuelling this ideology is the social media campaigns, reaching every nook and corner of this planet, conditioning the minds of the masses. For instance, investigations of some of the gory mass murders reveal that social media influenced the convicts.
How can such hate crimes be prevented? Regarding this radical ideology, the effective solution is educating at the primary level about communal harmony. Consequently, children will learn to respect the social diversity around them. In order to protect these communities, government must introduce cyber laws to nip these social media campaigns. At the same time, aid them in becoming the part of the vibrant civilization by educating the locals and clearing misconceptions. For example, the Canadian government is aiding the settlement of the refugees from Syria through mass education on social media about their situation and urging societies to be cooperative.
In conclusion, although disrespectful behavior is on the rise, education to all segments and administrative steps can tackle this amplified menace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76033057851 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03710856134 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652892561983 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6153425397 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183463986418 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060524733698 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386275911396 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108491479453 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127955536376 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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