Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country.
World is containg vast number countries. From country to country their life styes differs. I diagree with the statement that traveling in own country is more benifited that travelling foreign country. I feel this way for two main resons, wich I will explore in following essay.
First of all, travelling in other countries can learn about new foods which is limited to some forineg countries. My own experience is a compelling example for this. Last year I visited to Japan for my friend wedding. In my friend weddingmanue they inclued sushi. This is the first time I head about shshi and I didn't even know how to eat it. So if I didn't ettend that wedding funtion I wound't have no idea about shushi.
Secondly, visiting foreign countries will help us to know about their laguages. For instant, Once I went to India for my holiday. Iwas there for quite few day and I visited many places in India. In each state indians speak defrent languages. My tour guide told me that there are two hundred plus laguages in India. Moreover I got to know that there are somany words which is similer to my mother toung. All these information I got to know only because I went to India.
In conclution, I strongly belive that visiting foreign countries is more benifited that travelling in you won county. This is because the experience which I got about japanees food in my Japan tour and the experience that I got in Indian tour about Indan languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48908111522 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6197731078 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4210526316 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31578947368 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192941724016 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619444580951 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118654101249 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145001849522 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141445050518 0.0645574589148 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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