Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.
The plants and animal species, including human, are the biotic aspects of nature; which in close relation with the abiotic components make the life possible in this world. Nature is bestowed by the wide diversity of living forms; ranging from microorganisms to the huge mammals. The most prominent feature of nature is that each of these species, irrespective of their size and distribution, contribute to the balance of the ecosystem. Human being, due to the advanced intelligence and social behavior, dominates the planet. However, the uncontrolled exploitation of nature by human, for his both rational and irrational needs, has already resulted in the extinction of many life forms and many have attained the endangered status. If the modern man, benighted by his unwarranted domineer above other species, causes the exhaustion of natural system, it shall eventually threaten his own existence; as the man himself is an animate form. Therefore, it is undoubtedly the responsibility of human society to preserve and conserve every plant and animal species, despite the expenses: the every resource man has amassed (technological or financial) has its root in the exploitation of natural resources.
Plant and animal forms are momentous genetic resources. Agriculture, which marks the transition of human from hunting and gathering to systematic settlement, is entirely based on domestication of plant species. Today, the foods we consume are derived from the disease and pest-resistant crops, whose genome contains trait enhancing gene from wild plant species. The antibiotics, used to cure innumerable infections and save millions of life, are obtained from the wild microbes. Modern society cannot even imagine the plausible dilapidation if these advances with their resources get extinct. Therefore, while we utilize these species for our benefit, we must pay rapt attention to their conservation.
The ecosystem is balanced by the complex food chain, each species being associated with the other. Even the slight disruption in this system may lead to the multifold effect in nature. If a species disappears from the network, it eventually leads to the loss of its prey, predators and symbionts, who are interdependent for survival. Lack of effort to maintain the disturbed food chain may turn the cannon towards human civilization.
As we are ourselves the part and parcel of the Mother Nature, we should allow the natural system to proceed in its pace. While we use the diversity of nature as an opportunity for our advancement, we should also pay back commensurately to keep nature in its own state. Thus, not just for its progress, but mainly for its sustainability, human civilization needs to protect the plant and animal species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o protect the plant and animal species.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36574074074 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99020678068 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560185185185 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2248875065 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161335697584 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476112433508 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048414841976 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879969709898 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459513608226 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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