Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Maintaining a healthy relationship between people might be very difficult nowadays . There are many aspects of our interactions with others we should to worry about. In my opinion, there are times that telling the truth is not the best thing to do. I fell this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, sometimes being honest with some people and not telling them the truth, can encourage them to achieve their wishes. Whatever they are attending, people could be more motivated if they think it is possible to gain a brilliant result. My friend Fred was an example of this. Last year, Fred signed up for a runner competition in my city. He did not used to run a lot but he was convinced that he could win the race even if he competed with high level of runners. I knew that he would struggle to even finish the event, but I wanted him to feel confident about his ability. However, when he asked my opinion I lied saying that he had a chance of finishing in the top of ten. As a result, it gaves him motivation to keep training and dream about his position in the end of the race. If I had told him the truth, maybe he had gave up.
Secondly, telling the truth can lead to high level of anxiety. If we tell truths all time, we may spend hours or even days worrying about how unpleasant we were. An example of it happened with me last week. A friend of mine got a new hair cut, she was really happy with that and she came to my house to show it to me and she also asked if I had liked her new hair, I just said no because it did not combined with her face. Tought she did express anger about I said, I knew she was upset. As a result, I spent the rest of the day thinking about how bad were these words and my productivity at work also was reduced that day because I could not stop thinking how I should say sorry to her. I could avoid theses feeling if I had said she was looking gorgeous.
In conclusion, I believe that there are times that it is best to not tell the truth to keep a good relationship between people. This is because lies can motivate people to perform well, and it can also avoid personal turmoil.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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...However, when he asked my opinion I lied saying that he had a chance of finishing...
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...hair, I just said no because it did not combined with her face. Tought she did express a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22596153846 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27360136142 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4903095504 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120676676766 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410089195234 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484994555874 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901479431191 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323314265752 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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