Perspectives About Popular Cultures
Citizen have their own perspectives, modernisation as we are know right now, being terrible if we don't understanding about how should to do and how to make undercontrol. So that Perspectives About Popular Cultures from my side just merely dissenting opinion, please do right to understand my article.
Pop culture or usually called “mainstream culture” by Indonesian is a culture which always develop every time and it is always change by the time. Indonesian every year always add pop culture, such as mobile legend game in entertainment media, instagram in social media, and e-commerce for buy anything about. This essay will explain about two perspectives about popular culture from culture perspective and society perspective.
Indonesian always holds their heritage, they always do everything based on oriental tradition, but after the popular culture has come to Indonesia. There are different perspective from culture about this. Firstly, the culture always undergoes transformation, so this moment increase a number of cultures. Amount of culture in Indonesia is very much and it always increase. Secondly, popular culture gives bad impacts for culture in Indonesia, especially old culture. The bad impact which given by popular culture is the old culture changed gradually forget about their old culture. Thus, the popular culture gives good impact and also bad impact.
Besides, the society also has different perspective. Firstly, people usually love popular culture, they use examples of popular culture such as mobile game and social media. Therefore, people usually use it as alternative entertainment media. Secondly, today the information increases very well through information media and internet. The information keeps sharing to every person and it is help society to increase knowledge quality fast. The last, people love the product of popular culture in trade world, it is called e-commerce. The e-commerce helps society to increase economic condition, now people prefer to e-commerce for buy something. Thus, popular culture is more interested by society perspective.
In summary, popular culture gave differences perspective in society and culture. Giving more attention and understanding how we should do in our society as human being. More importen things that we should remembered, not being different and felt luxurius that others. As we know pop culture likes adoption different culture from another countries that looks like luxurius because trent and sosial life. People think that pop culture is not origionaly culture from our nation, so that it should made different perspection and bad behavior.
In conclusion we should to filter anythink culture expexially pop culture from another countrie that have bad impact for young generation in the our nation and potentially to grab interest young generation to conserve Indonesian culture. So that, indosian culture always be priority behavior from young generation to do in daily activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 1373.03311258 166% => OK
No of words: 406.0 270.72406181 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61822660099 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82507590978 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 145.348785872 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480295566502 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 419.366225166 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 13.0662251656 191% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0554415779 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.24 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.24 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46996984257 0.272083759551 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157931692913 0.0996497079465 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159367724724 0.0662205650399 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281047846723 0.162205337803 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137498684129 0.0443174109184 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.2367328918 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 63.6247240618 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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