Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many individuals agree that a successful sportsperson has an ability and talent inherited from our parents and grandparents, whereas, others believe that one can excel in any sport through hard work and practice. In my opinion, I do believe that working hard and practicing day and night are considered to be the foundation stone for a person to achieve fame in any sports.
Several people have this notion that a person can become popular in sports and can achieve the desired outcome through its hard work and practice. To be more precise, if a sportsperson is passionate about sports and with practice with a lot of dedication will not only help them to acquire the required skills and talent but also to attain perfection in their field. To elucidate, Sachin Tendulkar, a renowned cricket play worked industriously for many years to attain the title of the Best Cricket Player in the World.
However, some have an opinion that inherited quality and ability of a person is the main criteria in deciding whether he will be successful in the field of sports or not. Simply stated, an individual who is born with a particular talent and ability, is not required to do hard work and practice, as he already possesses those skills and knowledge that will aid him in being successful and prosperous. To illustrate, a well-renowned musician Mozart, had quality and creative skills in composing music since his childhood days did not achieve perfection through practice.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that a player can only be successful in a game if they have a strong will to achieve their goals through hard work and dedicated efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94223826715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77636340793 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.151371651 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 152.111111111 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224789527378 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100085396028 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059438003142 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147805940097 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475312905634 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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