12.You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:•give details of your visit to the restaurant•mention the reas

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12. You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

• give details of your visit to the restaurant

• mention the reason for the celebration

• say what was good about the food and the service

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my delight on the excellent service and high-quality food offered by your restaurant “Hotel Radisson”

Last Sunday we organised a party on the occasion of 50th marriage anniversary of my parents. It was small get together of family and friends. The services provided by restaurant was excellent. The place was decorated beautifully, the waiters were extremely professional and polite.

The current food and beverages menu offered a variety of dishes as well as cocktails and mocktails. The quality and the quantity of the food was very satisfying. Moreover, the way the food was presented was extraordinary. The waiters also were very experiences in suggest us the food we should order.

We ordered black pepper chicken and hot chilli garlic noodles. The quantity of food was apt and every one was satisfied. Furthermore, there was a perfect blend of black pepper in the meal. The chicken pieces were also perfectly cooked. The noodles were also very delicious.

Everyone enjoyed the meal and I would like to thank you for efforts made in organising the party.

Yours Sincerely

Prabhpreet Kaur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ur restaurant 'Hotel Radisson' Last Sunday we organised a party on the ...
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...re extremely professional and polite. The current food and beverages menu offered...
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...hes as well as cocktails and mocktails. The quality and the quantity of the food wa...
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...he quality and the quantity of the food was very satisfying. Moreover, the way the food was present...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...he waiters also were very experiences in suggest us the food we should order. W...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rty. Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2513368984 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89953999947 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 10.0 0.824742268041 1212% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.669290256 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4666666667 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173260905837 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545883356912 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389851509755 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915680439418 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387447721502 0.0580467560999 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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