It has recently been announced that a new restaurant will be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose the idea?Why?
When my friend told about the erection of new restaurant, I was amazed, because our small community has been waiting for it for a long time due to numerous reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
Firstly, to the locals, the new restaurant will be beneficial for all the residents including those lonely employees who have a tight schedule, and cannot cook at their own pace. They may have meals at the restaurants, or they might take their orders with them to either the work office or home. Furthermore, I heard that the restaurant will offer special discounts for employees and students as well. Indeed, students also will benefit from this restaurant, as it is near the university, and the campus lacks a food service, thus it would be a great opportunity to buy discounted meals, thus save up money for other things. In addition, couples, mates and family members will have the chance to gather for a lovely dinner.
Secondly, our small village has historical monuments which attracts visitors from around the globe, but unfortunately, they are forced to figure out how to eat, or bring their own meals, and as we are as far as 200 kilometers from the nearest city, and this is not favorable, therefore making it bad experience. This factor make our tourism sector suffer, despite the dazzling landscapes. The new restaurant will solve this issue, by offering local, tasty food in a great location, therefore, the number of tourists would increase in the years ahead.
Thirdly, the restaurant itself will benefit as it will receive myriad visitors, thereby, their sales growth will go up, so it’s a win-win business.
To sum up, the new restaurant will definitely enhance the growth of this small town both economically or socially.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98310810811 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67284179713 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8473064642 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.090909091 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 5.45110844103 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15046446632 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611324677003 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440846465123 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089391221203 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255603034009 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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