You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, It has stopped working. You spoke to the company representative a week ago, but it has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company, In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain the situation
Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
This is with reference to a Mobile phone that I have purchased on 10th November 2019, I have purchased a brand new I Phone X from an Apple store located in Prabhadevi, I have paid an amount of 80,000 through my credit card and I have received a bill for the same with 1 year warranty on it. My bill number is 786110 in the name of Kutub UDAIPURWALA, However I regret to inform you that after a few days of purchase my device has malfunctioned.
Let me explain it to you in detail. Although when I bought the mobile it was working fine, Suddenly within 1 week the battery of the phone started draining quickly. No matter how much I charged, the battery would run out within few hours of usage.
I have registered a complaint for the same to your executive on your company’s workshop and he assured me he would have it repaired and sent it back to me within 2 days. But unfortunately I have not received any response from him since 1 week.
I request you to kindly look into this and either get the mobile repaired or exchange it with a new one.
Hope you will consider me request and do the needful.
Your’s Faithfully,
Kutub Udaipurwala.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54418604651 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71017153439 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595348837209 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2946358316 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227487158343 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815733616997 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271145581351 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102618234776 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240040595448 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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