Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements makes product seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advertisement is a technique use to companies to attract people to but their products and it depends upon oneself to decide if that is right for him or not. Personally, if I have been asked I believe that it is true that more advertisement makes product look better. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, advertisement is the easiest medium to convince a person to buy a specific product which will lead to company’s financial gains. These days everyone has easy access to mobiles, televisions and other electronic gadgets which are used as first medium to show consumers about a product. Next, we have billboards, advertising at entrance or exit of free ways to influence people as part of their explicit and implicit memory to remember their product. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Few days back, when I was planning to buy a couch as part of thanksgiving sales, I started surfing internet to find a good one within my budget. After that, every time I opened Facebook or accessed any site on internet I started to see ads regarding different couch companies all over ads sections of those sites. As, a result, my mind was influenced by seeing those ads again and again from that specific company that I considered it as the best option and went ahead with that. This clearly depicts that if couch company would not have shown me that many times the ad for the same couch, I might have gone with a different one.
Secondly, companies are spending a lot of funds these days on advertisements as they know that everyone is surrounded with any type of ad every time. They show the ads many times a day to make sure that we have an image about that product every time. More we see an advertisement, more we think about it, and finally we decide that it is the best product in the market. For instance, my sister, who works as a marketing analyst, in one of the leading company revealed that they have proper strategic teams which decides the timings when an advertisement will appear on any of the electronic medium or placement of the ad at any physical location. They make sure that they target correct audience at correct time to increase the sales. In addition, she suggested that each advertisement, is made in specific format so that if people see them again and again it can create a positive impact on audience’s minds and not bore them being shown repeatedly many time a day. This clearly depicts that if people are shown ads for any of the product again and again at the correct time and place they start having an opinion that this product is the best one.
Thirdly, with each advertisement shown a number of times, we start talking about that product with our friends and colleagues, which indirectly, increase company’s sales and promotions. For instance, when I see an ad numerous times a day, I use it as a topic to talk about during my lunch or coffee breaks with my colleagues and that provides a free advertisement to those companies.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that more advertisements makes product look better. This is because advertisement is the easiest medium to convince a person, and because everyone is surrounded with any type of ad every time.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 956, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...nd not bore them being shown repeatedly many time a day. This clearly depicts that if peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, talking about, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 31.0 11.0286738351 281% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2718.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 576.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75565627266 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442708333333 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 868.5 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6875863004 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68181818182 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146616234514 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572915571662 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383455155078 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107442059841 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223776428748 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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