Nowadays, with the advancement of technology and transportation facilities, people can work and live anywhere they want.
Discuss its advantages and disadvantages:
improvements in technology and transportation facilities has meant that individuals today can work and live wherever they wish to.This essay sheds lights on pros and cons of technological and commuting advancement on the lives of people.
Firstly ,the advent of world-wide web coupled with latest communication protocols has helped communities to interact and cohabit in a better way than before.No longer are workers confined to their official workspace to carry out office task . Consequently through the use of internet,they can effectively do office work from comfort of their living room .In addition to this it has also meant that individuals can live in any part of the world without having the need of transcending physical borders across different nations.For instance an employee working for a software consultancy firm based out of India can provide services to clients in America through the use of enabling technologies.
Moving on to the disadvantages it can be easily inferred that technological advancement has resulted in netizens preferring the virtual world for their communication.As a result,when people don't meet in person , brotherhood between them is not maintained . Another demerit of advanced transportation facilities is that nevertheless it has made life easier for people saving them time but it has also led to individuals become less patient.
In conclusion,it can be said that on the one hand latest technological and improved transportation facilities have helped individuals and communities to work flexibly and live in place of their choice but on the other hand it has also led to problems of reduced brotherhood and impatience in people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28749389788 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6294209415 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 238.333333333 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.3333333333 20.7667163134 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266736801618 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130689488551 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742948709241 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171892514143 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555887120991 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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