Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, Teenage years are becoming quite challenging for most children and future generations. Adding to this, the great variation between ways, that they have been emerged currently, pairing themselves with their mates which might be conflicting and causing struggle. Also, dealing with rival pressure, fearing of academic and social failure, and trying to cope with overwhelming stress.
The question raising here is; whether our teenage years have been the best time periods of our life with all its whites and darks or adult life is the best among, and in order to answer this substantial matter, we got to disclose all the aspects of each one.
Starting with teenage life, which is considered as the most preferable time period for most of us, where life is out of responsibilities and charges. As, all that could matter since then is, how we can spend more time outside the bed, gaming, gathering with colleagues for an outing, claiming illness in order to skip a school day, or even complaining of mother’s food. For example, when I was a kid, I used to act asleep, in order not to get enforced to drink milk daily as it was my everyday struggle, as my mother has always been able to discover my artifice, claiming that I will be a great actress in the future.
On the other hand, adult life is completely irrelevant to the previous stage, where mindset becomes more open to the other world, accepting new concepts and getting attached to new challenges. Moreover, the ability to distinguish and analyzing our own issues and trying to figure them out, without seeking anyone’s assistance, which is certainly entitled “the peak of matureness”. Also, being capable of constructing a family, raising kids and above all, securing a permanent bread-winning sector.
Collectively, we could never neglect the fact that mature life is amazing and full of magnificent memories that is hardly erased or replaced, but adult life is as more of great interest as teenage life, except for it is an extent for how much we can bear and fight solemnly.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-23 | PALAK AHUJA | 84 | view |
| 2019-12-07 | Aman.Kansal1234 | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-06 | Ahmed Shehata | 67 | view |
| 2019-11-30 | Moustafa Nofale | 89 | view |
| 2019-11-30 | Moustafa Nofale | 73 | view |
- some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the law, is to make as 66
- Question authority. Only by questioning accepted wisdom can we advance our understanding of the world. 50
- Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 61
- Essay topics: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons for your answer a 84
- Essay topics: Essay topics: Essay topics: Essay topics: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with t 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, except for, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99132947977 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7832850133 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3177389624 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4545454545 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125360354287 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489659021577 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472194284014 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704821646118 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182968586484 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.