You have an extra room in your apartment and would like to rent it out to a student.
Write a letter to the university council officer. In your letter:
- describe your apartment and the facilities available
- mention why you want to rent out the room
- say what kind of tenant you would prefer
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in renting an extra room in my apartment to a student.
I have a two-bedroom apartment on the 7th floor of Alecia Building in Greater Kailash. The apartment is fully furnished, centrally heated and the kitchen has all the basic amenities for cooking. I would like to rent one bedroom with an attached bathroom to a student which as one single bed, air conditioner and a study table. The bathroom has a connection with both hot and cold water.
I would like to rent the room to someone because I live alone in the apartment with no one to talk to. So, having a company will help me to pass out my time and moreover, it will not be lonely.
I would prefer to have a girl student as a tenant with certain traits such as adjusting, responsible, mature and hygienic and good in academic records. Furthermore, I would expect her to follow a certain rule such as outsiders are not allowed to enter the house after 8 pm. She should not smoke or drink or play loud music as it will disturb the neighbours. The rent charged will be 800$ per month including the electricity and heating charges.
I hope that you will provide me with assistance in getting a suitable tenant with the required qualities.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 384, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$800'.
Suggestion: $800
...he neighbours. The rent charged will be 800$ per month including the electricity and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60833333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60607929763 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7394526913 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261771429398 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735805885142 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592055177863 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113609012539 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066504945438 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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