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Do small events lead to catastrophes or are great events initiated by other causes?
According to the laws of physics, matter can’t be obtained from nothing. This theory can also be used in our daily lives. Therefore, every disastrous problem, that we are obligated to confront, has a cause. According to my personal idea, small events are assembled and create a cause which is usually ignored. This small cause develops itself and someday hits you. Therefore, in this essay I will support this aspect of the issue and argue those who are opposing.
Humans tend to focus on important problems rather than solving small ones before they also become huge. This anatomic fact and te...
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Sentence: In our case the catastrophe is the mathematics test, the small event developing on its own is the chemistry test and the final situation is you getting a low grade from chemistry.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and you
flaws:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.235 0.35
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 476 350
No. of Characters: 2296 1500
No. of Different Words: 252 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.671 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.824 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.624 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 149 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.176 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.464 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.235 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.444 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5