You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner.
In your letter you should say:
• What you enjoyed a at the dinner
• Describe how you feel about his/her family
• Invite your friend and his family to your place
Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well. Although it has been just a week since I last saw you, it seems like it has been a long time. I am writing this letter to thank you for the wonderful evening I had at your place on last Saturday.
I was pretty amazed by the variety of dishes your mother served. At first I thought that some of them were ordered from restaurant, but later I asked her myself and she told me that your sister helped in preparing them and all of them were home made. Every dish was unique and mouth-watering. I literally have an urge right now to come at your place again and taste all of those varieties. And the kind of hospitality your family gave me while attending me was incomparable. It felt like home. Apart from that, the desert was something which I can’t forget, so delicious. I hope you don’t mind getting that for me someday.
Initially I was a bit nervous before visiting your home for the reason that I never met your parents before and as your dad is in army, I felt like behaving properly and get well dressed. But when I met them, I was amazed to see that they were as friendly as you. Infact, I would rather say that they are much funnier than you. And when it comes to your sister, she is a whole laughter package. I mean I never imagined that I will enjoy so much, that I’m already missing them. I know they are your parents but I somehow get a feeling as if they are my elder siblings, because of their friendly and open nature.
Therefore, I would like to express my gratitude and would like you, as well as your family to come at my place and have dinner. I’ve already discussed this with my parents and they are ready to attend you as hosts. You wouldn’t believe that even my sister Dolly, who you know is shy and an introvert, is excited to see you guys when I told her about the kind of experience I had at your house. I am thinking to schedule it on coming Saturday as all our parents would be free of work during the weekend. We are absolutely fine with the timings and it is upto you to decide that.
Do let me know in case you want anything special to get prepared. I’m looking forward to meet you all and have an awesome evening.
Best wishes,
Hemant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 92, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... get prepared. I'm looking forward to meet you all and have an awesome evening. ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, i mean, kind of, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.48453608247 307% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 5.05154639175 356% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 3.03092783505 528% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 101.0 32.9175257732 307% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 937.175257732 197% => OK
No of words: 424.0 206.0 206% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35613207547 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 3.78020617076 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34193719201 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 127.690721649 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 290.88556701 200% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 12.6804123711 197% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8720135497 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.88 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.96 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 7.41237113402 283% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405450799195 0.216113520407 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980850687915 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726972969196 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216687243011 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700766332081 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.