Some people argue that strict punishment for driving offenses is the only effective way toward improving safety on the road. Do you agree or disagree?
punishment for the driving offences are the effective ways for improvement on road safety. but to say it's the only solution is for the problem is wrong. there are certain other tasks which can also be used for instead of strict remand.
crimes of road driving are divided in different categories like not wearing helmets or seatbelts, breaking signals, rash driving and crossing speed limit, false number plates, without vehicle registration, expired driving license etcetera. Some countries have decided specific fine for each crime. monetary compensation are usual punishment for these driving mistakes. If road accident or physical injuries to other vehicle driver happens due to rash driving then strict punishment with law enforcement should apply. This can lead the better learning and licensing issue.
Exams and training for obtaining driving license is another important way to solve problems with road accidents. As it will be difficult to get permission for road drive with a proper permanent licence, person has to learn and obey rules of traffic strictly.
I disagree on point that only strict punishment can improve road safety. As mentioned above lot of experiments can lead towards the same motive. Suspension of licence and ban on driving for certain period is an idea to carry out awareness among people. Social media are advanced thing to creat public awareness about safe driving and traffic rules.
Basic thinking of the idea of punishment is to stop driving misconduct by innocent people. So always stricter way is not helpful but there should be alternatives to it which can help society in better way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30152671756 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57693518616 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629770992366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9860655509 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332182976683 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113428945741 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964366635001 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184037245307 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650309580941 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.