Are famous people treated unfairly by the media?
Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Over the past few years, there has been a rise in media companies by changing the way they do business. Although celebrities worry about their privacy, in fact, they are treated fairly by the media.
First, the media are consists of a diversity of opinions that were written by a lot of people. This gives a variety of information about an issue, which is clear and quite objective, by celebrities' fans, professors and authority. This means that celebrities should not be too pessimistic about it. In addition, there are some laws which banned to protect celebrities from fairness treatment. Media companies can't write misinformation that affects celebrities' image and life as they could be sued by celebrities to protect their life and work.
Second, fame and media attention, they are linked. Celebrities should be known that thanks to these activities they will pay more attention which means they can earn more and more money. This helps them improve their living standards. So, both of them should share the same responsibility. In fact, celebrities should have more responsibility for their privacy. It's just media enterprises' job to seek and give hot news to the readership to have profits.
In conclusion, the pool of media is fair to celebrities. And they should have measures and responsibility to make their life become more privacy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 409, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rom fairness treatment. Media companies cant write misinformation that affects celeb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26244343891 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85457609041 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1252666209 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332166915514 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114425423725 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899338355282 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224732658647 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558334141674 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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