You have a neighbor who is often burning rubbish at their house. Write a complaint about it to the local council and say
–What is happening?
–How is your family harmed by that.
–What could be the solution, in your opinion.
Dear Sir,
I am a resident of 34 Greenville, Chandigarh. and I am writing this letter to register a complaint against my neighbor’s offending activity of burning rubbish frequently at their accommodation.
They burn their rubbish after every third day of the week usually in the evening. Assumingly, they do it in order to get rid of the trash as well as to save their rubbish disposal charges. Initially, I discussed the matter with them and tried to resolve it amicably at our own level. However, they took no notice of my concern and continued to do the same. (Need a paragraph break here since by this time you have addressed the first question – What is happening?)
Owing to the harmful fumes emitted by the burning of rubbish, the health of my family is in jeopardy. The burning rubbish causes irritation in eyes of all family members, especially children. Neither my children can focus on studies, nor I can focus on work during that day. Furthermore (you can write furthermore only if you have mentioned a point earlier.), my grandmother is suffering from asthma which gets worsen up worse when their the burning activity takes place. (The question was not adequately addressed.)
I request you to warn them against doing it and suggest them to avail the facility of dumping waste during the weekend in the dump fields of the city. They can also avail the services provided by the council to recycle the rubbish in an eco-friendly way at absolutely no charges. (Solution adequately addressed. Good job!)
Thank you and I look forward to your prompt action.
Thanking you,
Yours sincerely.
YASH
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... resident of 34 Greenville, Chandigarh. and I am writing this letter to register a ...
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Line 13, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...or I can focus on work during that day. Furthermore you can write furthermore only if you h...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, third, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98905109489 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75892132264 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7415181088 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4117647059 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24168464674 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067129085281 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058173814062 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115080730145 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313570624011 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.