Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I disagree with the claim the men and women, because of their physical structure or differences are not equal in doing many tasks. Now days there is no difference between what men do and women do, we can see that womens are doing eually in each working sector like men.
Men and women are the two different genders, but when it comes to doing any task there is no such thing that women can not do that task. because they are physically, technically, socially trained by the education taken in different areas.
For example, there was a general assumption in the society that only men can work in army, navy and air-force service as it has tasks which is not possible for a women to do it physically like carring guns, going for war, to flue jet planes, but this assumption is not true we can see nowdays so many women officers are working in Navy,Army and Air-force service and doing all the work that a men can do like they can fly jet planes, they can go for wars.
Womens are raising their kinds even though they don't have husband, many of the womens lost their husband due to many reasons despit that she alone takes the responsibility of that child. this task is done by may women which somtime men can not do so it nothing to do with physical ability. For example, a great leader from south india babasaheb talke was raised by his mother when his father died when he was 1 year old. his mother use to work as a labor in a sugar producing factory to feed him. He later become a great leader in movement of social reform just beacause of his mother's hard work.
Men are there wrestling field and women also are there in wrestling which seems hard for a women to do but there is also gender equality in wrestling world now days.
Therefore, It is clear that even though physical differneces are there in men and women but they are equal in almost all field when it comes to doing many tasks, so Men and Women are equal in gender.
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- Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position. 16
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... thing that women can not do that task. because they are physically, technically, socia...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
... it has tasks which is not possible for a women to do it physically like carring guns, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...t has tasks which is not possible for a women to do it physically like carring guns, ...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Army
... many women officers are working in Navy,Army and Air-force service and doing all the...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...rce service and doing all the work that a men can do like they can fly jet planes, th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...e service and doing all the work that a men can do like they can fly jet planes, th...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re raising their kinds even though they dont have husband, many of the womens lost t...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'husbanded'.
Suggestion: husbanded
... their kinds even though they dont have husband, many of the womens lost their husband ...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...takes the responsibility of that child. this task is done by may women which somtime...
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Line 7, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: His
...his father died when he was 1 year old. his mother use to work as a labor in a suga...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...died when he was 1 year old. his mother use to work as a labor in a sugar producing...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...there in wrestling which seems hard for a women to do but there is also gender equality...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...ere in wrestling which seems hard for a women to do but there is also gender equality...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38227146814 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21371412545 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6977301484 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0833333333 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0355855905082 0.243740707755 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0193898142587 0.0831039109588 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239160617968 0.0758088955206 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0204915639847 0.150359130593 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169759027833 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.