You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology.
In your letter, you should:
• apology to your friend
• explain why you couldn’t attend the party
• say what steps you will take to avoid in future.
Hi Radhi,
I apologise that I am not attended your sangeeth party last night. Actually sindhu and I done reharsals for a hindi song to perform in your party. We were so excited and planned everything to surprise you .
I have taken permission from my manager to leave early so that i can reach the function early . We know like every time planning failed this time too.
My boss called me suddenly in the afternoon and told me that an inspection is going on and I have to stay and support the team. There was no alternative solution for me to escape and reach the occasion.
I once again really sorry yar.I will promise you that I will reach 2 days before your wedding and I already applied leave for 2 days for your wedding .Anyway hope for the best,after a long time all our childhood friends are coming along with their families . I am thinking this will be amazing.
I can't wait to see u dear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Radhi, I apologise that I am not attended your ...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
...party last night. Actually sindhu and I done reharsals for a hindi song to perform ...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht. Actually sindhu and I done reharsals for a hindi song to perform in your part...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erform in your party. We were so excited and planned everything to surprise you ....
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and planned everything to surprise you . I have taken permission from my manag...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... from my manager to leave early so that i can reach the function early . We know ...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y so that i can reach the function early . We know like every time planning failed...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime planning failed this time too. My boss called me suddenly in the aftern...
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Line 11, column 31, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...casion. I once again really sorry yar.I will promise you that I will reach 2 da...
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Line 11, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pplied leave for 2 days for your wedding .Anyway hope for the best,after a long ti...
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Line 11, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Anyway
...lied leave for 2 days for your wedding .Anyway hope for the best,after a long time all...
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Line 11, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , after
...r your wedding .Anyway hope for the best,after a long time all our childhood friends a...
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Line 11, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nds are coming along with their families . I am thinking this will be amazing. ...
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Line 15, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...m thinking this will be amazing. I cant wait to see u dear.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45508982036 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3616090345 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664670658683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7675075178 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142065407584 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447959476044 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518698246368 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631308449083 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078165330639 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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