Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some people that the price of products plays an important role to purchase something. While I agree with this opinion to some extent, I believe that there are other factors such as quality and durability of good.
On the one hand, it is essential that people should take into consideration the cost of something before making a purchase. Furthermore, they need to pay much attention if they can afford that item whether it leads them in problem in the future or not. For example, on many occasions, there are two goods with the same purpose and different cost. Therefore, they must buy it based on their monthly expenses as well as their whole salary. In my opinion, in this case, the price is urgent factor because of money matter.
On the other hand, in the modern era, more and more people tempt to get luxury and branded products without concern on how money they want to pay due to the quality and use it for a long time. Additionally, there are circumstances where the cost of items should be ignored completely. For instance, if a customer want electrical appliances like refrigerator, microwave and so on, they prefer to get the latest one from famous company. As well, they use credit cards by taking loans which have been offered by banks. I think, buying best quality thing will be beneficial to them and they will get less problem in their life.
To draw a conclusion, however the price is one factor in shopping, in my view, the quality and product's durability is excellent than its price and people should not see money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ury and branded products without concern on how money they want to pay due to the...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buying the best'.
Suggestion: buying the best
...ch have been offered by banks. I think, buying best quality thing will be beneficial to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69818181818 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50374661406 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7840336086 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145962691105 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507935871309 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596262400331 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108786238113 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775119735348 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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