Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
There is a considerable emphasis placed on making the world a smaller place. According to some, the internet is the backbone of this. I strongly agree with the idea that communication barriers have been drastically reduced due to the rapid development of the internet. Let us examine the role of the internet in creating a global village.
Firstly, it is undeniable that nowadays, technology is enhancing peoples' lives than ever before. Inter-personnel communication is mostly happening via cyber-space rather than face-to-face. For instance, decades ago, it was letters, and telegrams which disseminate information. Later the telephone took over the control of messaging and now we are in the era of Whatsapp, Viber and many other communication services.
Secondly, excessive usage of these free messaging services has made people closer together despite distance limitations. Within just a matter of seconds now we can connect with almost anybody in the world. Moreover, since most of these services are free, it has dramatically decreased the communication costs. Furthermore, the internet has created millions of new opportunities, especially in the tech industry. People are now working remotely and earning virtual currencies such as Bitcoin and reshaping not only the communication but also the world economy as well.
However, It would be deemed neglect of the negative sides of this development. Social and health issues are increasing exponentially worldwide as a result of heavy usage of the internet. Recent research disclosed that over 80% of youngsters are addicted to these online chat and messaging services affecting their education.
To recapitulate, while the world is becoming a global village, it is imperative to understand the drawbacks and use the internet responsibly to get the maximum benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57857142857 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16339877928 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7675738175 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8823529412 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247095963823 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650771770237 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045587007268 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1159602863 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787871133087 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.