Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

Now a days, many people state that internet binding the people together to share their feeling. It is just reducing the gap between the countries and people are away by clicks.

Certain demographics say that their relationship are strong because they talk regularly and share their happiness and sorrow on daily basis. Social networking sites are playing major role in one's life as most of the youth are engaging their half their time to in chatting. Online marriages are hiked their numbers from last 5 years. Everyone are adopting the new trend to meet the current social needs out of them, online classes and online booking took major proportions. Internet classes makes easier as it decreases commute and people could choose their flexible timings depending on their availability. Most of the companies addressing their complains and booking online making ones life better.

On the other hand many people say that we are loosing the ancient methodology of reading newspaper and magazines. Further predictors warns everyone that the more you addict to internet more problems you have to admit in the future to control forces like radiations or rays that emerge. A recent survey perplexed everyone that many children prone to health problems as it effecting visions and anxiety harmonies.

It was advised to limit our usage minimal other wise it tends adverse ramifications.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, many people state that internet bindin...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, many people state that internet bindin...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...working sites are playing major role in ones life as most of the youth are engaging ...
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Line 3, column 683, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...eir complains and booking online making ones life better. On the other hand many ...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: LOOSING_EFFORTRECORDSEASON[1]
Message: Did you mean 'losing the'?
Suggestion: losing the
... other hand many people say that we are loosing the ancient methodology of reading newspape...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: OTHER_WISE_OTHERWISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'otherwise'?
Suggestion: otherwise
... was advised to limit our usage minimal other wise it tends adverse ramifications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22421524664 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52537644559 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6118168904 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17601037515 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628562093611 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654336169573 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948281460442 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062696051838 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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