In some cultures old people are more valued, while in other cultures the youth is more valued. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Different countries may have different view toward the old and youth. Because of diverse social and culture circumstances, people from various backgrounds may show respect toward different age groups. I believe there are merits concerning both sides.
In some countries, youngsters are more valued because they are more dynamic and energetic which can accept new life and new condition quickly. And with these young generation, society can benefit from those young people since they novel motive power for social advancement with a wider ranger. Moreover, youths are always been better cultivated which most of them grow up with competitive and cooperative spirit. So that they can create more chances and challenges for whole society. Countries will have a quick development with their contribution.
On the contrary however, in some culture system, old people are seen as cherish treasure for family and been respected by every members. It also have own reasons. Many elder people having experienced all the hardships of life which means most of them may have sufficiently experienced and well knowledges. They can overcome obstacle with their past experience when meeting backsets. Also, elder people always have more wisdom than young man so they can lead youth to achieve more value toward society. Moreover, elder people value the time they have and want to enjoy the most of it. In general, elder people can help to release conflicts inside families.
Overall, I suppose we should value both because different age groups have different influence toward society. So they all deserves enough respect from others.
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'deserve'
Suggestion: deserve
...t influence toward society. So they all deserves enough respect from others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, i suppose, in general, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37890625 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53153632158 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7343656756 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170465680225 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548123421344 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458309763187 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982511368892 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468522989748 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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