The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&source=images&cd=&ved=2ahUKEwjFn7z21K3m…
The given maps of City Hospital in 2007 and 2010 illustrate some changes in the design of road networks.
Overall, the surrounding area around the City Hospital has changed remarkably after 3 years of 2007. New features, such as 2 roundabouts have been added while the old bus stoppages and parking site have been replaced in the later design.
In 2007, there was a single parking spot available for both hospital workers and the public at the near south of the city hospital. In addition to that, there were multiple bus stops along the hospital road. At the end of the hospital road, there was a ring road that looped around the main building of the hospital.
In 2010, near the East side of the building, there is a new parking space exclusively for the general people visiting the hospital. Whereas, the old parking spot is now used only by the staff. Moreover, there is colossal a bus station positioned in the south-west direction of the city hospital which replaced the old bus stops. Furthermore, there are roundabouts at the opposite ends of the hospital road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e general people visiting the hospital. Whereas, the old parking spot is now used only ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51243295299 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3668352291 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146275794705 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067153590696 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542552435898 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108859244196 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565682565346 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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