as part of your study you have worked for a short period of time in a company.
write a letter to the manager of this company. In your letter:
1. Thank he/she for the opportunity.
2. Explain how the experience gained there has helped you
3. Share your plan for the future
Dear Steven and Frank,
How are you, now ? I’m so fine. Firstly, I am really grateful for every moment you spend it to me. I have just received your photos which include us in beautiful scenes that I am very impressive. I really appreciate what you did to me and the time we have been together. that is unforgettable.
I actually apolosize (apologize) for being late to reply to the letter to you. I have absolutely been busy these days because my boss have just give me a tough task that I need much time to deal wih. that is the reason I really don’t want it to happen between us. But now, I just care about you, about what we did in recent months. so understand for me ! (125)
it would be convenient if you could come by and share each moment to me. I prepare a high-end and costly champagne, Sagvinon, which we really enjoy. Moreover, my best friends heard about you and really want to meet you because we think we have the same interest. I believe you won’t be dissapointed when seeing them.
Lots of love,
Huy Thinh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... me and the time we have been together. that is unforgettable. I actually apolo...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...together. that is unforgettable. I actually apolosize apologize for being late to reply to th...
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Line 9, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...task that I need much time to deal wih. that is the reason I really don't want ...
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Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ou, about what we did in recent months. so understand for me ! 125 it would b...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...months. so understand for me ! 125 it would be convenient if you could come b...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51041666667 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47611611715 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3944439367 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.7333333333 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146229384228 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458651431208 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424261513321 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806543981383 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561906299559 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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