An intelligent person that you know
Who is the person
What does he do
Why do you think he is smart
How do you feel about him
I have always been interested in surrounding myself with people superior to me or those who are more intelligent than me
because it really helps me know and surpass my limits. Similarly, here I am going to talk about a person whom I consider to be an intelligent person.
He is one of my best friends known as Arif. First time when I met him while I was in joined a computer training institute.
We have been together for about 5 years.
There are several things that really impressed me about him in the case of intelligence.
The first thing is his attitude. It doesn’t matter how intricate the problem is, he is always excited to solve it.
Despite focusing on the problem he always focuses on the solution. He is able to speak 4 languages which is an exceptional quality about him. Moreover, he is an expert in case of solving computer-related issues as he is the senior manager in his company because of his qualities. He has always been able to reach higher positions.
He has solved multiple problems of mine easily that was really hard for me. These qualities really make him unique and make him different from others.
The feeling I have, whenever I am with this guy, can’t be expressed in words. Since I am always able to learn something new
whenever I am with him.
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- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better toget a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- these days more fathers stay at home and take care of their childrenwhile mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20869565217 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70541360238 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0819672318 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.38176352705 799% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187067519134 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725177251012 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527325649744 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470068957294 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051184070229 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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