You are planning to give a presentation in your large company. Write a letter to your colleague asking for help.
- When and where
- What the presentation is about
- What you would like your colleague to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regard to get the information related to a flat for my upcoming vacation trip to Singapore.
I am starting my journey on 12/15/2019 and I am planning to be there for a fortnight. I have booked my flight itinerary through the online portal, though I am still looking for a place to live. I was confused to see multiple options over the internet.
my flight will arrive at 2.00 am, so It would be great if I can get an accommodation near to the airport. I am looking for a 2 bedroom set apartment for my visit as We are 4 adults traveling together.
I was not able to check online prices for an apartment, so I would highly oblige if you could write back a letter with some low-cost budget flat for my visit. Also, I would be more than happy to know the visa cost if any information you could provide.
Yours faithfully,
A Kansal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-12 | Aman.Kansal1234 | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m planning to be there for a fortnight. I have booked my flight itinerary through...
^
Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nerary through the online portal, though I am still looking for a place to live. ...
^^
Line 13, column 196, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I am still looking for a place to live. I was confused to see multiple options ov...
^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...iple options over the internet. my flight will arrive at 2.00 am, so It wo...
^^
Line 19, column 69, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...0 am, so It would be great if I can get an accommodation near to the airport. I am looking for a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51515151515 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62701931601 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5695684051 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130963863105 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602909810693 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484035515571 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686813035566 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362184088694 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.