Some people believe that upbringing of child is responsibility of a mother. Others say this responsibility lies with father.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, raising children is one of the most daunting tasks for both father and mother. It is often argued by some that the child's upbringing is the sole responsibility of a mother because children spend the most part of the day with them. Meanwhile, others still claim that a father has a strict nature, which helps to keep an eye on their child, so they should shoulder this responsibility. This essay will explore both sides of the argument before drawing a logical opinion.
On the one hand, the supporters of the view that the mothers should foster their child believe that from birth to the other phases of a child's life, a mother, being compassionate in nature, hamper minors with their unconditional love and care. As the father is a breadwinner spends the least time with his children, so they imbibe the major values of their mothers. For example, recent research revealed that the majority of children reflect the characteristic of their mothers because of spending more time with them. Thus, the more responsibility, to an extent, lies on mothers to teach kids about obedience and inculcate good moral values.
On the other hand, the advocates of the view that that the father should raise children by being strict which will help them to behave and practice good moral values. This is to say that the mothers are of a compassionate nature, so they are unable to refrain to children from doing bad activities. Take an example of a survey conducted by the Daily times revealed that the majority of younger generation claims, they do not drink alcohol because of their father's displeasure with them. Hence, it can also be considered as a valuable asset for breeding children.
However, from my perspective, the father and mother both play a pivotal role in the character building of their progeny, and children can get a lot of benefit by adapting their teachings. This would for sure, results in a child with a good moral value and a compassionate society.
To sum up, even though a father and a mother can individually contribute to fostering their children,
but I believe their combination would work wonders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93424657534 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72382233389 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2001028805 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.066666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251730818197 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897271414949 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518768435673 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127180922005 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769306726795 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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