Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In this digital era, some online courses are offered by some universities so that more and more people can study through internet. I think this is a positive trend.
study online is such a great way for students to study despite of the distance and cost. Thanks to the internet, today, people do not have to go to school to study, but they can study in their comfort, which could reduce the travel fee, and living cost as well. In fact, there are a lot of people who cannot afford to travel to study. For example, my sister-in-law who wished to study business management overseas in order to improve her business in her hometown but never could achieve her dream because of the financial problem, therefore, she had to take a business course online by a university in America. that helped her a lot for her business. studying online, therefore, benefits a lot to people who cannot travel and pay the bills for the offline course.
online courses, on other hand, can help students to study in their own pace. students can choose the course they wish and can review any time they want. In that way, they can be flexible and can manage their time easier. I myself used to take an online marketing course on Coursera. At the first time listening the lectures taught, I did not fully understand the lessons because the knowledge was totally new for me. therefore, I had to read some more books to understand the contents of the course. After that I got the chance to watch the lesson again and surprisingly, I totally understood the lessons. Thus, I believe that online courses that are offered by the university is very useful for anyone who wish to study in a flexible way.
In conclusion, if universities offered the online course, it could be a positive trend that benefits for a lot of people who wish to study in spite of distance and financial problem, and also help them to study in their own pace. distance and financial problem, and also help them to study in their own pace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60563380282 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44080240204 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456338028169 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4779896376 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331702705634 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107228128923 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098379170115 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246057471635 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129260375311 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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