Every year, someone in the company where you work is chosen as the best employee. Your manager has asked staff members to make suggestions about who should be chosen this year.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
• identify a colleague who you think should be the best employee
• explain what the job of this colleague involves
• give reasons why the colleague should be chosen as the best employee
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to recommend the name of the employee in the organisation to be chosen as the best employee.
According to me I would suggest the name of Adam Smith for the title of best employee in organisation as the best employee is the one who is more dedicated towards work and achieve all the goals within the deadline which I believe has been done by Adam Smith.
Adam Smith is the Senior Sales Manager in IDFC Mutual Funds for the past 2 years and has worked in the organisation with full commitment. He has achieved all the objectives of the organisation with in the stipulated time frame and has worked towards the growth organisation. Moreover, he has brought a lot of business to the company by increasing the clientele.
He should be awarded as the best employee as his dedicated and friendly attitude has motivated the junior employees to work with honesty and loyalty. Furthermore, he is a leader who not only set examples for the subordinated but also gives them the direction to work towards the growth of the organisation as well as for their personal growth.
I hope my suggestion will help you in selecting the best employee.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...on to be chosen as the best employee. According to me I would suggest the name of Adam Smith ...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...st the name of Adam Smith for the title of best employee in organisation as the best em...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81428571429 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8041271818 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4778079234 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20173012693 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841565551661 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512630207278 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11289290458 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518667199731 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.