Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
family: "Source Sans Pro", sans-serif; background-color: rgb(249, 249, 239);">Relax individuals are a crucial class="part">part of our society. every class="person">person has different characteristic class="when">when class="do">do anything without paying attention to its results. Some people believe class="that">that class="if">if everyone class="want">want to class="do">do their class="job">job class="well">well, they class="should">should class="do">do one class="thing">thing sole, while others hold the opposite class="view">view. In class="my">my class="view">view, everybody class="should">should class="do">do only specific class="task">task class="instead">instead of several things together for two noticeable reasons.
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family: "Source Sans Pro", sans-serif; background-color: rgb(249, 249, 239);">family: "Source Sans Pro", sans-serif; background-color: rgb(249, 249, 239);">The main class="reason">reason class="is">is class="that">that class="when">when people class="do">do class="so">so many different jobs simultaneously, they class="could">could be distracted. The majority of individual's class="brain">brain class="have">have low level of capacity for doing various tasks at the same class="time">time. this cause people to try focusing on them and class="so">so their class="brain">brain can not analyze quickly class="that">that class="harm">harm to works. For example, class="when">when I was in class="high">high class="school">school, class="my">my family was poor and needed more money in order to subsist. unfortunately, I had to class="work">work as worker in shopping beside on class="my">my studying. class="when">when I went to class="school">school every day, I was overwhelming class="about">about not only class="how">how to afford class="my">my family's expense class="but">but class="also">also class="how">how to class="work">work in shopping to earn more money. class="these">these events cause class="me">me to distracted from class and hurt class="my">my grade. In addition, class="when">when I was at class="work">work in the evening, I was anxious class="about">about class="my">my schooling. Consequently, this led class="me">me to fire from class="my">my class="work">work. Therefore, class="if">if I was just student, I class="could">could progress faster.
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family: "Source Sans Pro", sans-serif; background-color: rgb(249, 249, 239);">family: "Source Sans Pro", sans-serif; background-color: rgb(249, 249, 239);">The another class="reason">reason class="is">is class="that">that class="when">when people class="want">want to class="do">do several class="task">task altogether, they face the lack of sufficient class="time">time and make severe mistake. Daily class="time">time class="is">is limited and class="is">is the important class="part">part to class="do">do things. class="if">if anyone wants to class="do">do diverse jobs in limited class="time">time, they class="should">should be hurried class="that">that lead to miss concentration and make harmful mistake. For instance, class="when">when class="my">my friend was in class="high">high class="school">school, he decided to enter the best university. he registered in several extra classes in the afternoon beside his class="school">school at the morning. Clearly, he even did not class="have">have enough class="time">time to manage class="these">these numerous classes. class="also">also, at the night he had to study harder class="so">so as to cover whole content whether his class="school">school or added classes. Subsequently, class="these">these events force him to stay up late at the night like nocturnal. unfortunately, in the end of semester, he failed passing not only his exams in class="school">school class="but">but class="also">also entrance test for entering to university. this experience taught class="me">me class="that">that it class="is">is better to class="do">do one class="task">task class="instead">instead of several of them.
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family: "Source Sans Pro", sans-serif; background-color: rgb(249, 249, 239);">family: "Source Sans Pro", sans-serif; background-color: rgb(249, 249, 239);">In conclusion, I personality prefer to class="do">do one class="job">job class="well">well class="instead">instead of doing different class="task">task mistakenly because of distracting class="my">my class="brain">brain and limitation of class="time">time. we class="should">should concentrate on things class="if">if we class="want">want to class="do">do class="well">well and progress quickly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5670.0 1977.66487455 287% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 548.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 10.3467153285 4.8611393121 213% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.06925053926 2.67179642975 339% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445255474453 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1461.6 618.680645161 236% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.7 1.51630824373 178% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 152.001660521 48.9658058833 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.0 100.406767564 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 20.2962962963 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.03627173607 0.236089414692 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228306229229 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264496750684 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0186490171707 0.150856017488 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236608362642 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 11.7677419355 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -41.88 58.1214874552 -72% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.1 10.1575268817 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 42.75 10.9000537634 392% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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