The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995.

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The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995.

The graph illustrates the number of someland’s people, suffering from X disease, over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.

Overall, it is clear that a five-fold increase in the number of people, who had X disease, was seen until mid seventies, then this figure remained stable for 5 years, before dropping to zero in 1990.

At the beginning of the period, a hundred people contracted X disease in this area. this condition was stable for next 5 years. Suddenly, X disease had been raging for a decade in someland, with the number of infected people by this illness rising dramatically by 400 cases and reaching a peak of 500 cases in the mid seventies.

this increase ternd stoped for 5 years. A significant decrease was done from 1980 to 1990, with figures dropping to zero. someland recorded no cases of X disease during last five years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iod of 35 years from 1960 to 1995. Overall, it is clear that a five-fold in...
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..., before dropping to zero in 1990. At the beginning of the period, a hundre...
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...ople contracted X disease in this area. this condition was stable for next 5 years. ...
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...of 500 cases in the mid seventies. this increase ternd stoped for 5 years. A si...
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...to 1990, with figures dropping to zero. someland recorded no cases of X disease during l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70537237417 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.7345659407 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233882407828 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952540756781 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106212912154 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145475731478 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09647594872 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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