the graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995

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the graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.

The graph illustrates the number of someland’s people, suffering from X disease, over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.

Overall, it is clear that an increasing trend in the number of people, who had X disease, was seen until mid seventies, then this figure remained stable for 5 years, before dropping to zero in 1990.

At the beginning of the period, a hundred people contracted X disease in this area. this figure remained stable for next 5 years before doubling in 1970. Suddenly, X disease had been raging for a half of decade in someland, with the number of infected people by this illness rising dramatically by 300 cases and reaching a peak of 500 cases in the late 70s.

No changes were reported in this area until 1980. At this time we saw a reverse trend and someland got rid of X disease, with figure dropping to zero by 1990. someland did not record any cases of X disease during last five years.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74850299401 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53567185465 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2443436019 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236669919774 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969840461092 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930936502304 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141944113054 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775687096316 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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