When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

many people choose their jobs based on the amount of money which will be paid them. personally, I completely disagree with this idea that main consideration for choosing a job is high salary because I think there are other considerations that accompany salary to choose a profession.

On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary to cover our basic needs. For example, we all need to buy house and car, pay for bills, education and care physician. so, the amount of salary should be enough to meet our expenditures. If we didn’t consider this factor and selected our job based on enjoyment and non-financial factors, our lives would be difficult. Teaching in my country is among several jobs that make at least wage. so, most of them suffer from poverty and live with many problems.

Nevertheless, I believe that other consider">considerations are as important as salary. First, we all spend at least third of each day on our works. so, we should enjoy from our job. The workplace, colleagues and time could be most important when we want to choose a job. we cannot feel happy when we must do something that we do not like. Also, our jobs should be related to our skills and educations. For example, working in a mine make a good salary for its worker but it is not a good choice for someone who graduated from university in accounting degree. Last factor which I can mention in this essay is the time we should work. For instance, working in night shift can contribute higher wage but it is not suitable for somebody who is a morning person.

In conclusion, while salary is important when someone choose a job, other consider">considerations should be considered.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, third, while, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91065292096 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38827084305 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7243589169 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212339767115 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694920055978 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732423897901 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157475481695 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530041210764 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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