Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends more on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about happiness that, whether it has a direct relation to economic success or other aspects like health and satisfaction. However, I believe both viewpoints are required to achieve happiness.
At the outset, proponents of the statement "Money is not a God, but not less than God" believe that it is an absolute necessity to have personal happiness. Because there is nothing free in this materialistic world and to make an arrangement for food, shelter and clothing everyone has to spend a big chunk of money. Whereas, if one is unable to purchase the basic amenities, it would not be possible for him to remain happy. Moreover, to pursue dreams and desires that is another factor to stay happy, huge investments are required. For instance, to buy a luxury car it requires thousands of dollars. Thus money might have its significance to live happily.
On the other hand, along with money, some other factors are also mandatory. Health is the one among such factors to live a happy life. A person sustained by a dire ailment might become pessimistic about life. As an untreatable disease such as cancer, diabetes and heart attack could lead to a disastrous lifestyle. For instance, a survey by the health department states that people suffering from medical disorders are found 75% more pessimistic about life. Furthermore, a sense of satisfaction is the most important consideration for a happier life. No matter, how rich a person is, how much ambitious he is, if he is not the contended, he will always remain unhappy. It is because they race to possess materialistic things makes him restless, which means the state of unhappiness. For instance, the story of Alexander the great depicts that even after conquering the entire world, he died unhappily. Therefore, a person must have the satisfaction to live a happier life.
In conclusion, people have disparate mindsets about the source of personal happiness, I believe money and health are prerequisites but on the top of that satisfaction is a must.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08284023669 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91583320174 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0857358098 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4210526316 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150522067607 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431051930279 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767849343115 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113900460323 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10776941563 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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