There is a dispute between people about how it is better to spend time and money on a hobby that to spend on vain on video games.
Nowadays, there is a dispute between people about how it is better to spend time and money on a hobby than to spend in vain on video games. In my opinion, each of these options has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, any hobby can relieve stress. For example, after a hard day, a person can come home and start reading their favorite book or playing a musical instrument, and this will be very beneficial for their mental health. Secondly, some hobbies can become a future profession or even a vocation of life, for instance, playing an instrument can encourage people to write musical works and perform them on stage.
On the other hand, video games can be interesting, regardless of whether you play with friends or without them, however, it is bad for health, especially for the eyes. Some of them may also develop logical thinking and strategies and even teamwork. Unfortunately, this type of hobby leads to addiction, and this affects human health.
In conclusion, I would say that computer games are worse than a hobby, since there is a lot of harm to health, besides the development of thinking and teamwork.
- People like to slide down and climb the mountain. What do you think about how they endangered their life? Is it a good trend? 73
- The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. 56
- People like to slide down and climb the mountain. What do you think about how they endangered their life? Is it a good trend? 73
- People like to slide down and climb the mountain. What do you think about how they endangered their life? Is it a good trend? 56
- The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67185885056 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0194830856 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245915688277 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118066666572 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.275666976041 0.0667982634062 413% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187358731575 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.278546465185 0.056905535591 489% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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