People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The given condition totally depends on the decision taken emotionally. Many a time, if such types of decisions are positive it will lead to a great future. If these decisions are negative then it will cause harm to both the person who had taken the decision and the person against who the decision was taken.
There are many examples in history, people took decisions emotionally and achieved a huge success in their life. For example, Albert Einstein was considered a poor child in academics in his childhood but, he didn't give up and achieved a huge success in his life. Moreover, he had also given some theories that children are reading in their curriculum. So, we can say that a positive decision made emotionally can lead you to a huge success.
On the other hand, when we look at the greatest cruel person in the world. Adolf Hitler had a dream to conquer the whole world. He fought many battles but when he tried to win Russia. He considered the weather as a small problem and that lea to his death. Similarly, when we look at the case of Lord Sikandar. He also had a dream to win the world but unfortunately, he couldn't make it true. The reason is pretty clear in both of the cases, they made a decision on the basis of their emotion without considering the factors involved to make their dream come true. Sometimes, a decision made on the basis of emotion will not lead you to the things that you are longing for.
In my personal life, one of my teachers had a dream to become an IAS (Indian Administrative Service) officer. He was challenged by our principal that he can not make his dream true but he had taken this thing on his heart and he achieved the position that he deserved.
There is one of my classmates who had a big fight with someone and emotionally he shoot that one and now he is in jail. So, I can say one should not make any bad decisions emotionally.
In conclusion, I can say one thing that one should take a positive decision emotionally but avoid taking bad decisions on the basis of your emotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52150537634 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53772553144 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462365591398 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2311697372 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246748653916 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836387353393 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850206655436 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15249347363 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844287150318 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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